Writing in Public: Day 12, Month 02

“Pearl Diver” has been finished! It’s been renamed to “A Ningyo’s Pearls” and came in at 2,490 words. It’s been sent on to Spellbound for its sea monster themed issue. It’s my first time writing a children’s story, so I’m curious to see how it does. According to Duotrope, Spellbound is in the top 25 of most personable fiction markets, meaning they tend to personally respond to rejections. So, if the story is rejected there’s a good chance I’ll receive some comments on it. At the very least, that’s what I’m looking for.

  • Nonfiction: 119
  • Planning and outlining: 000
  • Short Fiction: 3,948
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 2,490

Total Fiction for Month: 24,467

Total Salable for Month: 7,290

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 74,690

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 18,234

Writing in Public: Day 11, Month 02

The first revision of “Pearl Diver” is finished, and the second revision is underway. That should (hopefully) be finished tomorrow morning, depending on how the work day goes. Once that’s finished, it’s on to the first revision of “Putting a New Face on an Old Place” and beginning brainstorming for Penumbra’s “Isolation” theme. If I’m fortunate I can start the rough draft of a story for that as well, but I won’t hold my breath on it.  That could prove to be a tall order, but it’s always good to dream!

  • Nonfiction: 118
  • Planning and outlining: 000
  • Short Fiction: 2,408
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 20,519

Total Salable for Month: 4,800

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 70,742

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 15,744

Writing in Public: Day 10, Month 02

Today was another underproductive day.  I can’t say “unproductive” because a little bit was accomplished.  Mostly brainstorming on a few short story ideas that have been stewing in my brain for the last several months without me realizing it. I’ve committed very little of these brainstorming activities to paper, which is something I’ll need to rectify before I forget it all again.

I did get started on the revision of “Pearl Diver.”  I’m tempted to mark what I wrote as “salable” as I’m taking my time with getting the wording correct.  Also, the rough draft came out a lot more solid than I had originally thought it would.  But, who knows?  I may scrap and rewrite it several times, so I’ll keep it as simple fiction additions for now, and only once she’s off will the salable part come out.

Yesterday I found out that “Zombielock” wasn’t going to be a good fit for the UFO Anthology.  Alex Shvartsman gave me a rare personalized rejection notice and offered some suggestions on what my second submission ought to be.  It was also good to know that the story did make it far into the process before its ultimate demise.  That’s heartening considering this is a professional anthology.  Here’s hoping one or two of my other ideas take form in the next few weeks!

“Zombielock” has been sent elsewhere, so we’ll see how she fares elsewhere.

In other news, I have a few recently-written works that I haven’t tried to send out for publication in awhile because I’ve lost whatever faith I had in them.  It’s my goal to set aside some time this week to go through at least one of them and see if I can improve on them and send them out again.  Hopefully full rewrites won’t be needed, but that option is on the table.

  • Nonfiction: 335
  • Planning and outlining: 300
  • Short Fiction: 513
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 18,111

Total Salable for Month: 4,800

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 68,334

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 15,744

 

Writing in Public: Day 09, Month 02

Today I started making headway on “Putting a New Face on an Old Place.”  I changed protagonists around in the morning and re-outlined the story.  The bulk of the rough draft was written in about 2,300 words, enough that I have a good idea of what’s working and what’s not.  For instance, the story was originally a back-and-forth conversation between two people, the protagonist and the person who’s trying to get the protagonist to change and make a decision.  I’m thinking of adding a third person, one who’s trying to keep the protagonist on the current, dire course.  In a way, both characters will be externalizing what’s going on in the protagonist’s head, as the protagonist understands a change is needed.  He just doesn’t want to do it.  Not initially, anyway.

I also came up with a couple of ideas for humor-based stories I may try and flesh out at a later date, or sooner if the story in the previous paragraph just doesn’t pan out.

Today I was supposed to start my revision of “Pearl Diver.”  It didn’t happen, and I have no excuse other than poor time management.  I knew we had a church function following the regular service and we were also headed to the movie theater in the afternoon which turned into a dinner date.  The Wind Rises is well worth seeing, by the way.  Different from Miyazaki’s other works in that it’s a biography/docudrama rather than a complete work of fiction, but the animation is still top-notch.

  • Nonfiction:
  • Planning and outlining: 450
  • Short Fiction: 2,300
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 17,598

Total Salable for Month: 4,800

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 67,821

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 15,744

Submission Sunday – Week Ending 03/09/2014

Finally, a week with more new submissions than resubmissions!  Of course, two of these stories were written before this week.  I just didn’t get around to the final edits until the other day.

Summary: 3 New, 2 Resubmission

“Blue Pearls” submitted to Crossed Genres.

“Alien Concept” submitted to Crossed Genres.

“Zombielock” submitted to Unidentified Funny Objects.

 

Resubmissions:

“Who Killed Zombie Robin?” resubmitted to Black Static Magazine.

“False Light” resubmitted to Lightspeed Magazine.

Writing in Public: Day 08, Month 02

Weekends are always strange.  There seems to be a lot more free time to write and yet often less gets done.  There are errands to run and chores to do and other things to take care of that just don’t get done in the week.  Before you know it, it’s night time and you’ve only finished one of two daily projects you wanted to tackle.

The rough draft for “Pearl Diving” has been finished at roughly 2,850 words, and the outline for “Putting a New Face on an Old Place” has been accomplished, although I think I’ll want to revisit that tomorrow before I get started on the rough draft of that.  There are some soft parts of the plot that need firming up before I want to sit down and spend time on a rough draft.  I don’t think the story will be all that long, either.  Likely it’ll be right at 2,000 words or so, which is shorter than I originally anticipated.

  • Nonfiction: 190
  • Planning and outlining: 1,350
  • Short Fiction: 2,850
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 15,298

Total Salable for Month: 4,800

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 65,521

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 15,744

Writing in Public: Day 07, Month 02

“UnCivil Engineering” is finished!  It has also hereby been renamed “Zombielock.”  It came in at about 4,800 words.  Edited it down quite a bit and got some critical feedback on it.  It’s been fired off to Unidentified Funny Objects.  Hopefully we’ll get some good results for it.

Also finished my final edits on both “Alien Concept” and “Blue Pearls.”  Both have been sent off to Crossed Genres for their first-ever flash fiction themed issue.  They’re accepting up to three stories, so I’ll have to cook up another between now and the end of the month.  I don’t know that my flash fiction pieces are any good, but they’re a fun challenge.  Developing a full beginning, middle, and end is a tough thing to do in 1,000 words or less.

Ok, on to today’s numbers:

  • Nonfiction: 91
  • Planning and outlining: 350
  • Short Fiction: 2,400 (Halved the salable total, as it wasn’t all new words)
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 4,800

Total Fiction for Month: 12,448

Total Salable for Month: 4,800

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 62,671

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 15,744

Writing in Public: Day 06, Month 02

I’m glad yesterday was as productive as it was, because today the ol’ day job interfered.  Put in a twelve hour day and didn’t have a whole lot of time – or energy – to produce anything.  I did start reading – and editing – “UnCivil Engineering.”  It’s my hope to get it finished and out the door tomorrow at the latest.

Ok, on to today’s numbers:

  • Nonfiction: 91
  • Planning and outlining: 000
  • Short Fiction: 785
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 10,048

Total Salable for Month: 000

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 60,271

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 10,944

My Cranky Lady of History: Joan of Arc

In honor of both Women’s History Month and the Cranky Ladies of History project (And to promote their new anthology, Cranky Ladies of History), I present to you my Cranky Lady of History: Saint Joan of Arc (Or Jeanne d’Arc if you don’t like my anglicization of a French name).

Pretty much everyone knows the story of Joan on some level or another.  She was taught in the history books I grew up studying, at least.  So, I won’t go too much into her other than what the Catholic Church says about her:

 

St. Joan“St. Joan of Arc is the patroness of soldiers and of France. On January 6, 1412, Joan of Arc was born to pious parents of the French peasant class, at the obscure village of Domremy, near the province of Lorraine. At a very early age, she heard voices: those of St. Michael, St. Catherine and St. Margaret.

At first the messages were personal and general. Then at last came the crowning order. In May, 1428, her voices “of St. Michael, St. Catherine, and St. Margaret” told Joan to go to the King of France and help him reconquer his kingdom. For at that time the English king was after the throne of France, and the Duke of Burgundy, the chief rival of the French king, was siding with him and gobbling up evermore French territory.

After overcoming opposition from churchmen and courtiers, the seventeen year old girl was given a small army with which she raised the siege of Orleans on May 8, 1429. She then enjoyed a series of spectacular military successes, during which the King was able to enter Rheims and be crowned with her at his side.”

I will leave the rest of her history out of it, but the link is here.

Courtesy of WikipediaOne thing you may not know is that Mark Twain wrote a book about the life of Joan of Arc.  It was written in the latter days of his life and became a bit of an obsession for him.  Originally it was published in Harper’s Magazine as a serial during 1895, with the book coming out in 1896.  At Mark Twain’s request to Harper’s it was published anonymously because he feared it would be taken for a humorous piece, as Mark Twain was known for his satire.

He considered it his best work, and it was arguably the one he spent the most time working on.  While his critics disagreed with him I consider it to be one of his best because it is so different from what he was known for.  This was a book over 40 years in the making, when he first learned of Joan and became fascinated with her.  I sometimes wonder if the eternal skeptic came up against an historical figure whose actions he could not explain in any rational way.  Either Joan was completely crazy and was hearing voices, or she was touched by God.  If the former, how do you explain her coming to be in command of an entire nation’s army?  (All obligatory French jokes aside, the French military was quite powerful at this time.  And, failing that, the egos of the nation’s military leaders were even more formidable, making them less likely to bend knee to a peasant girl of 17 years).

Anyway, the book is well worth reading.  As is studying the life of Joan herself from non-fiction sources.

This post is written as part of the Women’s History Month Cranky Ladies of History blog tour. If  you would like to read more about cranky ladies from the past, you might like to support the FableCroft Publishing Pozible campaign, crowd-funding an anthology of short stories about Cranky Ladies of History from all over the world.

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Writing in Public: Day 05, Month 02

If every day could be like today…  Well, we could still do better, but it would be much more amazing than some of my days have been of late.

“UnCivic Engineering” is done.  The rough draft and the first revised rewrite, anyway.  I put another 2,700 words in on the rough draft and came up with a total rough draft of around 4,200 words (Approximate.  I typically write rough drafts by hand).  The first revised rewrite was written in the afternoon from about 1:30 to 5:30, and it came out to around 5,063 words.  That’s even longer than the rough draft was, but I know why.  Even though both versions contained the same number of scenes, in the rough draft I was just dropping the characters into each scene without any kind of transition.  One scene they’re running for their lives, the next they’re up on a roof wondering what to do, the next they’re on a different roof.  This time the scenes flowed into one another.  I think the added transitions are an improvement to the overall flow of the story, but a lot can still be cut out.  That’s what tomorrow afternoon will be dedicated to.  I want to go through the story scene by scene, then paragraph by paragraph, then line by line.  The fat needs to be trimmed out and anything humorous needs to be maximized.

I’m pleased with the results for what they are, though.  A rough draft that needed to be rewritten, and a rewrite that will need a bit of revising.

Ok, on to today’s numbers:

  • Nonfiction: 586
  • Planning and outlining: 000
  • Short Fiction: 7,763
  • Novel Fiction: 000
  • Salable words: 000

Total Fiction for Month: 9,263

Total Salable for Month: 000

Total Fiction for Challenge Year: 59,486

Total Salable for Challenge Year: 10,944